Ok so the other day I got a little stoned, and I started thinking about new ideas. Some a little more fucked up then others.
1) Pure madness pure defiance. The story will have a lot of twists a kind of who's done it. The world goes in to chaos, when a blogger starts a blog stating, ''I will crush the queen on a certain date and time''. Who is the mystery blogger, who threatens to kill the queen of England.
Also I've been thinking about my assignments and dissertation, and rely have decided to go against the conventional methods and work on a idea I was told I couldn't rely do.
My next was thinking about money. And how to a lot that is the meaning of life. Money is the main objective and through this inequalities are born. As we know we live in a materialistic world, so without money you can not ave the best things.
Then I thought how is money created, having a business, do you need an education to achieve this yes and no, yes you need some kind f education (basic) but you don't need grades but it helps. Look at all of the people that have become successful but failed school.
Alan Sugar
Bill Gates
Richard Branson
Jamie Oliver
Education isn't the key determination and self confidence is. making money is simple and easy and I will start a social experiment that shows how. I will learn you to get Rich.
Has you can see a little stoned, then my mind worked a bit over time, and I threw myself into a panic attack, but I soon brought myself round, and the thoughts continued.
I come up with a quote
'' There is no point Preaching to kids, that you can't preach to''
The Establishment don't like this, they don't like us to have our own mind, they don't like us to think.
So what do you do with undistructive kids, Well Micheal Gove's plan is to bring in the Army. Lets get the kids back under control and make them obedient.
The education system is failing.
Okie .P. Arkwright
Farther and Husband. At the moment I work in alternative education with teenagers, whith the main focus been creativity. I also like to write and producer my own stuff. And lately just found my element so working towards achieving this. This blog is me my work my thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 10 February 2012
Friday, 3 February 2012
Sick Fairies 1st Draft
So here is the first draft I hope you enjoy it as you see it needs a lot of work, but it's a working progress, and hopefully soon we will have the full comic up on our website, that I'm working on at the moment, so until then enjoy and I will keep you posted
INT HOUSE
We enter a house the house is very minimalist whit wooden furniture, there is a young boy sat on the floor playing with a stick the young boy is very stocky (ogustus out of Charlie and the chocolate factory). His mother comes into the room she is very tall slim and tender, but she doesn’t look very happy.
MUM
Jack you just stay here today, because you just slow me down, and we can’t afford you getting caught again and costing me another 6 lumus.
YOUNG BOY IN THOUGHT
I know that my mother didn’t pay 6 lumos, she slept with Mr Smith to stop him from taking me to the police station, I could hear the springs of the mattress and the moaning like a wolf crying to the moon.
MUM
Are you listening Jack, stay here and keep your head low.
JACK
Sure thing mother.
MUM IN THOUGHT
That boy is so useless, but how is he so fat, I’m sure he must be hiding food, I’ll find it one day.
The mother leaves, Jack continues to play with the stick.
CUT TO MARKET PLACE
The mother is in the market, there is stalls all swoping and trading animals, food, and clothing. We see the mother approaching the fruit and veg store. She reaches out and grabs a couple of apples and runs before anyone can see. She runs down an alley way were to thugs approach, the thugs attack her quite sexually beat her and take her apples. The mother walks home her cloths draping off her face bloody. She arrives back to her house and young Jack is sat on the step.
JACK
Mother what happened to you.
The mother walks up to her son and starts to kick him on the step he starts to crawl through the door.
INT HOUSE
In the house the mother continues to beat him quiet violently he manages to get up and run’s away out of the front door. His mum runs after him but he manages to get away which is a shock at the size of him. His mum enters back in the house sits and the kitchen table with her head in her hands and cry’s.
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When the young boy finally stops he comes to the forest at the back of the house, He is a little hesitant to enter the forest, because when he was a lot younger and his dad was alive he used to tell Jack a bunch of stories about the woods, these stories involved ghost, witches, monsters fairies everything that the imagination could dream up. But Jack takes a deep breath and enters the woods.
INT WOODS
The woods are very dark and creepy, we can here owls, and see all sorts of eye’s watching him. All of a sudden he comes to the most weirdest and ugliest tree he has ever seen, but on one branch is the most juiciest reddish looking piece of fruit hanging from the branch. Jack was guessing it was a fruit, but he could be sure because he had never seen anything like it before.
JACK IN THOUGHT
My mother is pretty mad with me, I mean she has hit me before but not like that. Shall I take this home for her she would be so happy, but then again I’m starving.
Jack sit’s underneath the ugly looking tree and eats the red delicious unusual looking food. It taste delicious. After eating it he rest’s under the tree for a little while and then decides he should start to head back, as he is starting to get freaked by the shadows in the dark and the noise’s. The young boy runs home as fast as his feet will carry him.
INT HOUSE
Jack enters the house to find that his mother is not there, he checks her room nothing. He wonders where she is,
JACK
Mum where are you I’m sorry I ran away again, mum
JACK IN THOUGHT
I wonder where she could be.
CUT TO A MAN’S HOUSE
Jack’s mother is in bed with a man, once there are finished the man kicks her out and then closes the door.
MUM
Arthur you promised
The door opens up and the man throws out a bag to her. She inspects the bag in side there is some rotten fruit and vegetables, she walks home in the pouring rain. When she gets home she takes some of the fruit from the bag puts it on a plate and goes up to Jacks room, Jack is asleep on the wooden floor rapped in a dirty blanket filled with holes. She goes up and gives Jack a shake.
MUM
Jack are you sleeping, jack I’ve got some food, I’m sorry for earlier I didn’t mean it.
She bends over and gives Jack a kiss on his cheek.
MUM
Goodnight Jack sweet dreams.
The mum leaves the room as she does, jack opens his eye’s and quickly starts to eat the food. All of a sudden he starts to be sick violently. He sees that in the sick there is a little person with wings it is a fairy. He examines the fairy before passing out.
CUT TO NEXT DAY.
The next day when Jack wakes there are now five little fairies surrounding him. He doesn’t know what to do so he runs out his room downstairs shouting of his mother. The fairies follow. He gets down stairs and runs in the kitchen with the fairies following him. He turns and stops on the spot, the fairies stop in front of his face.
JACK
What are you what do you won’t.
FAIRY
NSABDJ APJN
JACK
I don’t understand I’m sorry.
FAIRY
NSABDJ APJN
JACK
I don’t understand.
His stomach starts to rumble.
JACK
God I’m hungry, I wish there was some better food around here.
All of a sudden the fairies start to whiz around and vanish, they arrive back with some of the best looking food that Jack had seen in a long time, some of it so exotic that he had never seen it.
JACK
Wow where did you get all this food.
FAIRIES
NSABDJ APJN
JACK
Whatever.
He sits down at the kitchen table and starts to indulge in all the food. He then goes and sits in his room, the fairies follow him to his room.
JACK
Oh it would be nice to have a nice bed and furniture and to live in a cleaner house.
All of a sudden Jack start’s to be sick again, but this time, there is about 20 fairies within his sick, then all of the fairies start to whiz around and again vanish. When the fairies return they have a bed they put it in the room, then whiz around again and the room is spotless. The boy goes down stairs and there is new furniture and the house is spotless. The boy realizes, that everything that he is asking for the fairies are getting.
JACK
Interesting, I wish that all of our empty cupboards were filled with food and the table is set with a nice stew for mother returning.
The fairies start to whiz around, they vanish, then they return, filling the cupboard with food while, some of the fairies start to make the stew. Everything is prepared as the door starts to open, all the fairies have vanished leaving Jack just stood there.
MUM
What is all this where did it come from, Jack how did you get this. Beause you obviously didn’t go out and steel it.
Jack just shrugs,
MUM
Jack tell your mother were you got all of these things, and what smells so delicious.
JACK
Stew
MUM
HHMM Stew, anyway we are getting of the subject. Where did this all come from.
Jack shrugs again.
MUM
Why you little shit.
His mum grabs Jack by the arm.
JACK
Mum your hurting Me.
MUM
Tell me where you got this stuff.
JACK
Mum you are hurting me
She hits jack
MUM
Tell me.
But Jack refuses to say, he doesn’t know what to say would she believe him about the fairies.
MUM
Tell me.
She hits him again and again and again, when all of a sudden the fairies come out of hiding grab the mothers hand push her back, then all stand in front of Jack as if they are protecting him.
MUM
What the hell, what are these things.
JACK
I didn’t know how to explain, but now the fairies are here.
MUM
Fairies there's no such things as fairies.
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JACK
Well you tell me what these are then mother. And aren’t fairies suppose to grant you wish’s well that’s what they have done, they answered my wishes‘.
MUM
They did all this, but where did they get it al.
JACK
I don't know. It’s ok fairies, this is my mother Margaret.
MUM
So anything you ask for the fairies obey.
JACK
It seems like that.
MUM
I would like a cow, I wish for a cow.
But nothing happens the fairies stay where they are.
MUM
I said I wish for a cow.
Again nothing happens.
MUM
I think somebody is telling some porky’s so where did this all come from
JACK
Mum I’m telling the truth, fairies I won’t you to abbey my every mothers command, do you understand.
FAIRIES
NSABDJ APJN
JACK
Try again mum.
MUM
Oh ok, I’ll play your little game Jack, I wish for a cow.
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The fairies start to whiz around. Then all of a sudden they return with a cow. The mother starts to laugh esoterically.
MUM
So where did you find these fairies son I can make a fortune.
JACK
You're not going to believe me mother.
MUM
Well I wouldn’t have believed that there was fairies that granted wish’s, so I will believe anything at the moment.
JACK
They come from me.
MUM
They come from you what do you mean.
JACK
They come out of me when I vomit.
MUM
When you vomit.
JACK
Yes when I vomit.
MUM
Well start vomiting them fairies up lad, I’m going to make a killing at the market tomorrow, there will be no more stealing, no more Arthur Smith. No more Arthur Smith, now there is a thought. Fairies I wish for you to kill Arthur Smith.
JACK
No mother you can’t.
The fairies start to whiz around, and they vanish.
JACK
Mum what have you done.
7
CUT TO ARTHUR SMITHS HOUSE
We see the fairies arrive at Arthur Smith’s house, their breaking through every bit of Arthur’s house, Arthur is in bed with another woman, The fairies eat the flesh of Arthur Smith and leave, leaving the woman with a skeleton that once was Arthur Smith in a bloody room.
CUT TO JACKS HOUSE
The fairies return covered in blood,
JACK
Oh mother what have you done.
The mother laughs an evil laugh.
MUM
Right boy give me more of them fairies.
Jack tries to run but is mother is on him before he can get anywhere, she drags him into the attic and chains him up. The fairies try to stop her.
MUM
I wish for you to leave me alone and make your way to the kitchen.
The fairies make their way to the kitchen, the mother laughs a wicked laugh.
MUM
Fairies I also wish for you never to listen to my son Jack again, I am now your master. Sweet dreams Jack
Jack sits in the corner and cries.
CUT TO NEXT DAY
The mother comes down the cellar and realizes the son has not produced anymore fairies, she grabs a bucket, grabs her son and forces her fingers down the boys throat to make him sick. He is sick in the bucket, and in the booklet within the vomit are the fairies, the mother continues to make the boy sick until the bucket is half full. The mother takes the bucket of fairies and vomit, and makes her way into the kitchen were the other fairies are from the other night.
MOTHER
Fairies I wish that I had a 100 lumos,
Nothing happens
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MOTHER
Didn’t you her me I won’t 100 lumos.
FAIRY
DNSAO NDJSN CDJ
MOTHER
What
FAIRY
DNSAO NDJSN CDJ
MOTHER
I do not understand I wish for you to speak English.
FAIRY
We cannot go and produce money, we are very sorry.
MOTHER
Well ok follow me.
CUT TO MARKET
The mother is now at the market, she has got a crowd, gathering were she stands.
MOTHER
Ladies and gentlemen what if I told you, you could have anything you wish for anything at all and you wouldn’t have to lift another finger again, we would all become the same as each other, what if I told you that you could have fairies that would make your food, do your work, clean your house. What would you pay for such a thing.
MAN 1
There is no such things as fairies.
MARKET PLACE PEOPLE
Yeah, there's no such things.
MOTHER
Well I beg to differ, ladies and gentlemen I would like you to be the very first to see our new labor, our new workers.
The mother takes out, one of the fairies from the bucket, the market goers look on in amazement.
MOTHER
You sir if you could have anything right now, anything what would you won’t
MAN
I don’t know gold.
MOTHER
I wish for gold.
Nothing happens
MOTHER
What is wrong now.
FAIRY
We cannot produce gold or lumos. We take from mother earth.
MOTHER
Sorry sir but you will not be having no gold today.
MAN 2
She’s a fake.
MOTHER
No sir I am not the fairies cannot produce Gold or lumos, anything else.
MAN
Well I’d like a cow, mine is on its way out and his milk isn’t what it used to be.
MOTHER
Fairies I wish for a cow.
The fairies do a whiz, then they vanish they return with a cow.
MOTHER
Sir I will let you have that cow for free, if you purchase a fairy for let’s say 10 lumos, nobody around here can afford 10 lumos.
10
OLD WOMAN
I can,
An elderly woman walks forward through the crowd and purchase a fairy.
MOTHER
Fairy I wish for you and you only to serve this lady and nobody else, you are her slave now. For the rest of you I’d advise you to go to neighboring towns and sell what, you can, as you can see you will gain more by having a fairy, sell everything you own and spread the word they are plenty were these come from.
CUT TO JACK AND MOTHERS HOUSE
The mother makes her way into the cellar, the boy has produced no more fairies, she takes another bucket and again forces him to be sick in the bucket till it is full. She then leaves the cellar and goes to bed.
CUT TO - NEXT DAY MARKET
The next day the market is heaving with regulars and new people, all wonting fairies, they start to sell out fast.
We then have shots of the fairies been used as slaves by all the people that have bought them. Fairies working on farms cleaning houses ect.
CUT TO MUM AND BOY IN CELLAR.
Again the mother is making the boy be sick in buckets. Then leaving to sell them at the market. Once the mother has gone the young boy starts to vomit rapidly, until there is hundreds of fairies, The fairies uncuff the boy but he can’t stand because he is so week. The fairies carry the boy and start humming a song.
We have shots of fairies all over hearing the song, and dropping their duties and humming the same song.
They all congregate in the woods with the young boy, then all of the fairies start to glow and set on fire and burn themselves and the young boy in the woods.
CUT TO NEXT DAY
The mother is sat at her kitchen table crying, with all her money in front of her. We hear shouting from outside of the house.
SHOUTING
WE WON’T OUR MONEY BACK OR WE WILL BURN YOUR HOUSE DOWN.
The people set her house on fire and the mother burns with all her money.
So let's get started, today I've been looking over the first draft of a script I've been working on. And it's bad, great idea but executed wrong. I will upload a copy of the first draft. But a friend of mine likes it, and he is a drawer, so we are turning this draft into a graphic novel. and here is some of his concept work for Sick Fairies (working title) I would describe Sick Fairies as a dark and twisted tale. The meaning of the story is to show the different classes, as we openly live in a class society that is ran on greed.
The Work is by Karl Whiting
The Work is by Karl Whiting
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