Friday 10 February 2012

Ok so the other day I got a little stoned, and I started thinking about new ideas. Some a little more fucked up then others.

1) Pure madness pure defiance. The story will have a lot of twists a kind of who's done it. The world goes in to chaos, when a blogger starts a blog stating, ''I will crush the queen on a certain date and time''. Who is the mystery blogger, who threatens to kill the queen of England.

Also I've been thinking about my assignments and dissertation, and rely have decided to go against the conventional methods and work on a idea I was told I couldn't rely do.

My next was thinking about money. And how to a lot that is the meaning of life. Money is the main objective and through this inequalities are born. As we know we live in a materialistic world, so without money you can not ave the best things.

Then I thought how is money created, having a business, do you need an education to achieve this yes and no, yes you need some kind f education (basic) but you don't need grades but it helps. Look at all of the people that have become successful but failed school.

Alan Sugar
Bill Gates
Richard Branson
Jamie Oliver

Education isn't the key determination and self confidence is. making money is simple and easy and I will start a social experiment that shows how. I will learn you to get Rich.

Has you can see a little stoned, then my mind worked a bit over time, and I threw myself into a panic attack, but I soon brought myself round, and the thoughts continued.

I come up with a quote

'' There is no point Preaching to kids, that you can't preach to''
The Establishment don't like this, they don't like us to have our own mind, they don't like us to think.
So what do you do with undistructive kids, Well Micheal Gove's plan is to bring in the Army. Lets get the kids back under control and make them obedient.

The education system is failing.



Friday 3 February 2012

Sick Fairies 1st Draft

So here is the first draft I hope you enjoy it as you see it needs a lot of work, but it's a working progress, and hopefully soon we will have the full comic up on our website, that I'm working on at the moment, so until then enjoy and I will keep you posted

INT HOUSE

We enter a house the house is very minimalist whit wooden furniture, there is a young boy sat on the floor playing with a stick the young boy is very stocky (ogustus out of Charlie and the chocolate factory). His mother comes into the room she is very tall slim and tender, but she doesnt look very happy.


MUM

 Jack you just stay here today, because you just slow me down, and we cant afford you getting caught again and costing me another 6 lumus.

YOUNG BOY IN THOUGHT

I know that my mother didnt pay 6 lumos, she slept with Mr Smith to stop him from taking me to the police station, I could hear the springs of the mattress and the moaning like a wolf crying to the moon.

MUM

Are you listening Jack, stay here and keep your head low.

JACK

Sure thing mother.

MUM IN THOUGHT

That boy is so useless, but how is he so fat, Im sure he must be hiding food, Ill find it one day.


The mother leaves, Jack continues to play with the stick.

CUT TO MARKET PLACE

The mother is in the market, there is stalls all swoping and trading animals, food, and clothing. We see the mother approaching the fruit and veg store. She reaches out and grabs a couple of apples and runs before anyone can see. She runs down an alley way were to thugs approach, the thugs attack her quite sexually beat her and take her apples. The mother walks home her cloths draping off her face bloody. She arrives back to her house and young Jack is sat on the step.

JACK

Mother what happened to you.

The mother walks up to her son and starts to kick him on the step he starts to crawl through the door.

INT HOUSE

In the house the mother continues to beat him quiet violently he manages to get up and runs away out of the front door. His mum runs after him but he manages to get away which is a shock at the size of him.  His mum enters back in the house sits and the kitchen table with her head in her hands and crys.

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When the young boy finally stops he comes to the forest at the back of the house, He is a little hesitant to enter the forest, because when he was a lot younger and his dad was alive he used to tell Jack a bunch of stories about the woods, these stories involved ghost, witches, monsters fairies everything that the imagination could dream up. But Jack takes a deep breath and enters the woods.

INT WOODS

The woods are very dark and creepy, we can here owls, and see all sorts of eyes watching him. All of a sudden he comes to the most weirdest and ugliest tree he has ever seen, but on one branch is the most juiciest reddish looking piece of fruit hanging from the branch. Jack was guessing it was a fruit, but he could be sure because he had never seen anything like it before.

JACK IN THOUGHT

My mother is pretty mad with me, I mean she has hit me before but not like that. Shall I take this home for her she would be so happy, but then again Im starving.


Jack sits underneath the ugly looking tree and eats the red delicious unusual looking food. It taste delicious. After eating it he rests under the tree for a little while and then decides he should start to head back, as he is starting to get freaked by the shadows in the dark and the noises. The young boy runs home as fast as his feet will carry him.

INT HOUSE

Jack enters the house to find that his mother is not there, he checks her room nothing. He wonders where she is,



JACK

Mum where are you Im sorry I ran away again, mum

JACK IN THOUGHT

I wonder where she could be.

CUT TO A MANS HOUSE

Jacks mother is in bed with a man, once there are finished the man kicks her out and then closes the door.

MUM

Arthur you promised

The door opens up and the man throws out a bag to her. She inspects the bag in side there is some rotten fruit and vegetables, she walks home in the pouring rain. When she gets home she takes some of the fruit from the bag puts it on a plate and goes up to Jacks room, Jack is asleep on the wooden floor rapped in a dirty blanket filled with holes. She goes up and gives Jack a shake.




MUM

Jack are you sleeping, jack Ive got some food, Im sorry for earlier I didnt mean it.


She bends over and gives Jack a kiss on his cheek.

MUM

Goodnight Jack sweet dreams.


The mum leaves the room as she does, jack opens his eyes and quickly starts to eat the food. All of a sudden he starts to be sick violently. He sees that in the sick there is a little person with wings it is a fairy. He examines the fairy before passing out.

CUT TO NEXT DAY.

The next day when Jack wakes there are now five little fairies surrounding him. He doesnt know what to do so he runs out his room downstairs shouting of his mother. The fairies follow. He gets down stairs and runs in the kitchen with the fairies following him. He turns and stops on the spot, the fairies stop in front of his face.

JACK

What are you what do you wont.

FAIRY

NSABDJ APJN

JACK

I dont understand Im sorry.

FAIRY

NSABDJ APJN

JACK

I dont understand.

His stomach starts to rumble.

JACK

God Im hungry, I wish there was some better food around here.

All of a sudden the fairies start to whiz around and vanish, they arrive back with some of the best looking food that Jack had seen in a long time, some of it so exotic that he had never seen it.



JACK

Wow where did you get all this food.

FAIRIES

NSABDJ APJN

JACK

Whatever.



He sits down at the kitchen table and starts to indulge in all the food. He then goes and sits in his room, the fairies follow him to his room.

JACK

Oh it would be nice to have a nice bed and furniture and to live in a cleaner house.


All of a sudden Jack starts to be sick again, but this time, there is about 20 fairies within his sick, then all of the fairies start to whiz around and again vanish. When the fairies return they have a bed they put it in the room, then whiz around again and the room is spotless. The boy goes down stairs and there is new furniture and the house is spotless. The boy realizes, that everything that he is asking for the fairies are getting.

JACK

Interesting, I wish that all of our empty cupboards were filled with food and the table is set with a nice stew for mother returning.

The fairies start to whiz around, they vanish, then they return, filling the cupboard with food while, some of the fairies start to make the stew. Everything is prepared as the door starts to open, all the fairies have vanished leaving Jack just stood there.

MUM

What is all this where did it come from, Jack how did you get this. Beause you obviously didnt go out and steel it.


Jack just shrugs,

MUM

Jack tell your mother were you got all of these things, and what smells so delicious.

JACK

Stew


MUM

HHMM Stew, anyway we are getting of the subject. Where did this all come from.


Jack shrugs again.

MUM

Why you little shit.


His mum grabs Jack by the arm.

JACK

Mum your hurting Me.

MUM

Tell me where you got this stuff.

JACK

Mum you are hurting me

She hits jack

MUM

Tell me.

But Jack refuses to say, he doesnt know what to say would she believe him about the fairies.

MUM

Tell me.

She hits him again and again and again, when all of a sudden the fairies come out of hiding grab the mothers hand push her back, then all stand in front of Jack as if they are protecting him.

MUM

What the hell, what are these things.



JACK

I didnt know how to explain, but now the fairies are here.

MUM

Fairies there's no such things as fairies.

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JACK

Well you tell me what these are then mother. And arent fairies suppose to grant you wishs well thats what they have done, they answered my wishes.

MUM

They did all this, but where did they get it al.

JACK

I don't know. Its ok fairies, this is my mother Margaret.

MUM

So anything you ask for the fairies obey.

JACK

It seems like that.

MUM

I would like a cow, I wish for a cow.


But nothing happens the fairies stay where they are.

MUM

I said I wish for a cow.

Again nothing happens.

MUM

I think somebody is telling some porkys so where did this all come from

JACK

Mum Im telling the truth, fairies I wont you to abbey my every mothers command, do you understand.

FAIRIES

NSABDJ APJN

JACK

Try again mum.

MUM

Oh ok, Ill play your little game Jack, I wish for a cow.
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The fairies start to whiz around. Then all of a sudden they return with a cow. The mother starts to laugh esoterically.

MUM

So where did you find these fairies son I can make a fortune.

JACK

You're not going to believe me mother.

MUM

Well I wouldnt have believed that there was fairies that granted wishs, so I will believe anything at the moment.

JACK

They come from me.

MUM

They come from you what do you mean.

JACK

They come out of me when I vomit.

MUM

When you vomit.

JACK

Yes when I vomit.


MUM

Well start vomiting them fairies up lad, Im going to make a killing at the market tomorrow, there will be no more stealing, no more Arthur Smith. No more Arthur Smith, now there is a thought. Fairies I wish for you to kill Arthur Smith.

JACK

No mother you cant.

The fairies start to whiz around, and they vanish.

JACK

Mum what have you done.

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CUT TO ARTHUR SMITHS HOUSE

We see the fairies arrive at Arthur Smiths house, their breaking through every bit of Arthurs house, Arthur is in bed with another woman, The fairies eat the flesh of Arthur Smith and leave, leaving the woman with a skeleton that once was Arthur Smith in a bloody room.

CUT TO JACKS HOUSE

The fairies return covered in blood,

JACK

Oh mother what have you done.


The mother laughs an evil laugh.



MUM

Right boy give me more of them fairies.


Jack tries to run but is mother is on him before he can get anywhere, she drags him into the attic and chains him up. The fairies try to stop her.

MUM

I wish for you to leave me alone and make your way to the kitchen.


The fairies make their way to the kitchen, the mother laughs a wicked laugh.

MUM

Fairies I also wish for you never to listen to my son Jack again, I am now your master. Sweet dreams Jack


Jack sits in the corner and cries.

CUT TO NEXT DAY

The mother comes down the cellar and realizes the son has not produced anymore fairies, she grabs a bucket, grabs her son and forces her fingers down the boys throat to make him sick. He is sick in the bucket, and in the booklet within the vomit are the fairies, the mother continues to make the boy sick until the bucket is half full. The mother takes the bucket of fairies and vomit, and makes her way into the kitchen were the other fairies are from the other night.

 MOTHER

Fairies I wish that I had a 100 lumos,

Nothing happens
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MOTHER

Didnt you her me I wont 100 lumos.

FAIRY

DNSAO NDJSN CDJ

MOTHER

What

FAIRY

DNSAO NDJSN CDJ

MOTHER

I do not understand I wish for you to speak English.

FAIRY

We cannot go and produce money, we are very sorry.

MOTHER

Well ok follow me.


CUT TO MARKET

The mother is now at the market, she has got a crowd, gathering were she stands.

MOTHER

Ladies and gentlemen what if I told you, you could have anything you wish for anything at all and you wouldnt have to lift another finger again, we would all become the same as each other, what if I told you that you could have fairies that would make your food, do your work, clean your house. What would you pay for such a thing.

MAN 1

There is no such things as fairies.

MARKET PLACE PEOPLE

Yeah, there's no such things.

MOTHER

Well I beg to differ, ladies and gentlemen I would like you to be the very first to see our new labor, our new workers.



The mother takes out, one of the fairies from the bucket, the market goers look on in amazement.

MOTHER

You sir if you could have anything right now, anything what would you wont

MAN

I dont know gold.

MOTHER

I wish for gold.

Nothing happens

MOTHER

What is wrong now.

FAIRY

We cannot produce gold or lumos. We take from mother earth.

MOTHER

Sorry sir but you will not be having no gold today.

MAN 2

Shes a fake.

MOTHER

No sir I am not the fairies cannot produce Gold or lumos, anything else.

MAN

Well Id like a cow, mine is on its way out and his milk isnt what it used to be.

MOTHER

Fairies I wish for a cow.

The fairies do a whiz, then they vanish they return with a cow.

MOTHER

Sir I will let you have that cow for free, if you purchase a fairy for lets say 10 lumos, nobody around here can afford 10 lumos.


10

OLD WOMAN

I can,



An elderly woman walks forward through the crowd and purchase a fairy.

MOTHER

Fairy I wish for you and you only to serve this lady and nobody else, you are her slave now. For the rest of you Id advise you to go to neighboring towns and sell what, you can, as you can see you will gain more by having a fairy, sell everything you own and spread the word they are plenty were these come from.

CUT TO JACK AND MOTHERS HOUSE

The mother makes her way into the cellar, the boy has produced no more fairies, she takes another bucket and again forces him to be sick in the bucket till it is full. She then leaves the cellar and goes to bed.

CUT TO - NEXT DAY MARKET

The next day the market is heaving with regulars and new people, all wonting fairies, they start to sell out fast.

We then have shots of the fairies been used as slaves by all the people that have bought them. Fairies working on farms cleaning houses ect.

CUT TO MUM AND BOY IN CELLAR.

Again the mother is making the boy be sick in buckets. Then leaving to sell them at the market. Once the mother has gone the young boy starts to vomit rapidly, until there is hundreds of fairies, The fairies uncuff the boy but he cant stand because he is so week. The fairies carry the boy and start humming a song.

We have shots of fairies all over hearing the song, and dropping their duties and humming the same song.

They all congregate in the woods with the young boy, then all of the fairies start to glow and set on fire  and burn themselves and the young boy in the woods.

CUT TO NEXT DAY

The mother is sat at her kitchen table crying, with all her money in front of her. We hear shouting from outside of the house.

SHOUTING

WE WONT OUR MONEY BACK OR WE WILL BURN YOUR HOUSE DOWN.

The people set her house on fire and the mother burns with all her money.



So let's get started, today I've been looking over the first draft of a script I've been working on. And it's bad, great idea but executed wrong. I will upload a copy of the first draft. But a friend of mine likes it, and he is a drawer, so we are turning this draft into a graphic novel.  and here is some of his concept work for Sick Fairies (working title) I would describe Sick Fairies as a dark and twisted tale. The meaning of the story is to show the different classes, as we openly live in a class society that is ran on greed.

The Work is by Karl Whiting